There were a girl named Biff and her Mum. Mum cut apple from near tree. Mum gave her a job what picked up the apples. She discovered some of the apples are bad and she didn't pick up the rotten ones. But Mum made Biff pick up all the rotten apples and put them in the box. A man with a house and cart came down the street. The man named Harry Smith. He made people laugh, so everyone liked him. He wore a top hat and a red cort everyday. Harry Smith rang a bell and he started for sale. Mum bought some logs, but the logs were heavy. Harry Smith helped Mum to carry them. Biff looked at the house and she gave the house an apple. The house took it with its big teeth. Sudden, the house saw the box of apples and began to eat them, but it's eating all the bad ones. Biff told Harry Smith about house, however he lough. Biff looked in the box and it was empty. All the apples had gone. Children wanted a ride on house and claimed on the cart. The house began to ran. Harry Smith pulled the reins, but the house went faster and faster. Suddenly, the house began to sway. It made a funny noise. Then it sat down and went sleep. Harry Smith and children claimed off the cart. The rotten apples made the house drunk. Biff was sorry. Harry Smith laugh and he didn't mind. People came to see the house. They bought things from the cart. He sold everything and he gave children a present.
The house is very poor, but I think it connect good things.
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Chisato,
Though I haven't read the story you've written about, I would like to know why you chose it. I believe you've mis-typed a key word many times in this book review. The cover photo that you've included shows a horse, rather than a house, doesn't it?
Although spelling and grammar checking tools in Word may not catch that particular error, they will catch many others scattered throughout this review (and other posts). So I suggest that you check all of your major posts (book reviews and essays, at least) in Word or other word processing programs, and correct all of the errors found either before or soon after you make such posts.
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