BR 2-08: It's Not Fair

There was a girl named Biff. Biff's class teacher had ill so they had new teacher. They listened story. It was King Arthur. Children was going to drama about King Arthur. All boys were kinght but Biff was wearing dress. Biff want to be kinght. When she get back her room, the magic key began grow. The magic key took Biff King Arther's castle. She wearing a dress. She told King Arther want to knight but he said can't and he laught. King Arther had meeting but many knights want to sit down near King Arther. Biff had idia what the table got a round table. It was nice idia!! She again told King Arther want to be knight, but he was laught. Then the magic key began grow and she got back room. She said It was not fair.
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BR 2-07: The Scarf

Anneena made scarf with her Mum. She made a very long scarf. It was very good and looks very warm. The cold day, Anneena and her friend go out with Anneena's Mum. They went to park, but the park's lake was frozen. When they took bait for many duck, some children came near. They made a fool of Anneena's scarf and Anneena's Mum came and she stoped it. A boy went to frozen lake. The lake was very dangerous!!!! Anneena's Mum told him the get off!! Suddenly, the frozen lake was blake!! The boy said help! Anneena'a Mum made very long rope made by long scarf and closes. They throw it to the boy. The boy cought and they pulled the rope. He said sorry and he went to hospital. He was all light. Anneena was feel glad because her scarf help him.

I will made scarf by myself!!:) If I have many time.....

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BR 2-06: The Camcorder

Wilma's dad bought a camcorder. He took children race, Wilma's sport, Jo's wedding and his aniversary by video. They watched the video and taling. Wilma borrow her father's camcorder. When she made a video where near house, the two man running who burglar. They took call police and she took them by video. At once, the police was come. They watched two man on video and they arrested them. The police thanks Wilma and her father.

The timing is very nice!! When Wilma made late video, the burglar wasn't arrested. It was miracle!:)

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BR 2-05: The Wedding

Jo was got marry who Mum's sister. It's very happy news. Her grandparents came to see her wedding. Mum made a dress to wearing wedding for Wilma. But Wilf didn't wearing wedding close. Grandmother made a big wedding cake!! It was very cute and beautiful. They feel happy.
The Wilma's dress was ready. Her friend came to see her. Mum went to shopping to bought Wilf's suit. The Wedding day, they took many picture and video. Everyone felt very happy. The day started big party. Everyone dancing and hopping.
I want to get marry. I will someday get marry!!:) My many friends already married!! I want to fast marry;)

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Protfolio for writing IV

Student ID: 07127

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1c

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	Typing Essay: website	08.09.28	3	413	7	2	2	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	Essay: My Favorite Place	08.10.09	5	453	2	0	3	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	MR:Mrs.doubtfire	08.11.15	1	167	9	0	0	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	Essey:community life	08.11.18	3	135	1	0	1	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	Short essay: Spa	08.11.30	4	239	0	0	2	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	Essay: Learning with Computer	08.12.14	4	183	0	0	2	0
Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

Typing Essay: website

　　I choose this essay, because the picture is cute and good sentence. The links are very good and cute!! I think this essay is best.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	MRS. DOUBT FIRE	08.11.05	33	HI!! Tie:) I think family is importamt for us because they know everything about us. They can understant us. We must take care of our family. What do you think about family??
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Typing Essay: website	08.10.01	38	I like chocolate, too. When I stayed at America, there are so many kinds of chocolates, and the taste was so sweet more than Japanese chocolates but I like American chocolate. How many kinds of chocorates are there?
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Essay: My Favorite Place	08.10.09	69	also like to go downtown with some friends of mine. We did went downtown the other day, didn't you? We had a wonderful time at a variety of shops. The broiled meats we ate in Daikokuten were really delicious :) I want to go there again.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

•Middle of my blog

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then write out your reflections on both giving and receiving comments here.]
• ....
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	BR 2-01:Man Eating Snails	08.11.14	329	0
2-02	BR 2-02: Soup with obby	08.11.23	334	1
2-03	BR 2-03:The Dragon and the Phoenix	08.11.30	164	0
2-04	BR 2-04:Lost in the Jungle	08.12.05	336	0
2-05	BR 2-05: The Wedding	08.12.19	109	0
2-06	BR 2-06: The Camcorder	08.12.22	93	0
2-07	BR 2-07: The Scarf	08.12.23	155	0
2-08	BR 2-08: It's Not Fair	08.12.29	139	0
2-09	BR 2-09:Camping Adventure	09.01.06	147	0
2-10	BR 2-10: Land of the Dinosaurs	09.01.08	140	0
2-11
2-12
2-13
2-14
2-15
2-16
2-17
2-18
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	○
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")		○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 11 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), books (21) brainstorms (4) favotites (4) free (5) graphics (36) links (5) lists (4) media (2) Movies (3) P.P.essay (10) protfolios (1) quickposts (3) reviews (37) Typing Homework (14) writings (2) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?		○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...
2. ...
3. ...

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• ...
• ...
• ...
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• ...
• ...
• ...
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).

Essay: Learning with Computer

I always use computer when I must write this blog. The comouter is very useful and good tool. People all day use computer who work use to computer. The computer is connect all over the world people. The computer is universal.

The computer has many tool. Web mail, Internet, Blogs and so on. I always use internet to searching and use watching movies. Internet is very useful. We can watch a lot ob web site and we can know many things. We can use dictionary when we don't know how to read the sentence.

We can community with all over the world people. When we use computer, we use aometimes web mail. Mali is very fast and eaasy to send. I sometimes send mail to another coutries people. It is very wonderful!! We can communication with anoter countries. So, we can make a lot of friend who another country.

Computer is very useful and computer has a lot of informations. We profit a lot if things to do. We think no computer, no life. The computer is help us life from now on.

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I get a fat.

I took bathroom scale yesterday...... I felt sad!!!! Because, I got a fat ＋2 kilogram...... Why???(;-;) I always ate a lot of food, but I don't got a fat.... I must make slim my body. I dicited to start diet!!☆ Recently, I don't have a lot money, so I start saving to use money. I want to became beautiful or cute!! I must do my best and spend really regular life. Some shop has many supplement to be good life and body. I want to drink it, but I must saving money.

Please tell me how to make body slim??? I try start diet and reular life.

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Learning with computer

I always use computer. Computers are very useful and give us information. We always use internet. Internet can communication with all over the world people. We can send mail another country people. When I know another country, we can search with internet. Internet is very useful!!!!
I always use internet. I must write blogs so, I always use blog and internet ans sometimes watching movie, listening music and watch my friend's blog. But computer is very difficult, because computer has many tools. I can't use all tools and I don't know many tools. I can't typing fast so I always slowly in class. Computer has education game, so I tried it and practice typing.
Computers are very dangerous, because computer has people's information. If someone know people's information, someone use very but things.

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Brainstorming: learning with computer

Communication
People
Tools
Computer applications
Mail
Web applications
Blogs
Chat
Web Mail

Information
Searching
Internet

Connecting
Convenience
Typing
Dictionaries
Shopping
Movies
Translation
Pictures
Challenges
Other
Typing
Knowledge
Educational games
ful
Helpful
Useful




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BR 2-04:Lost in the Jungle

One day there were three children. Next day was their Mum's birthday. They were going to gave to their Mum. Chip gave her chocolate box with beautiful pattern wrap and Kipper gave her monkey what staff animal made by his school class. Biff wasn't decided to present. Mum liked plant so she was going to go buy a plant. Biff went to her friend's Mum plant shop. There looks like jungle. There were a lot of plants!! Biff hesitate which plant bought Mum. She could decided Mum liked plant. She bought it. The Mum's birthday was came. Children gave her presents. She was very glad and happy. Her husband gave plant to her and Biff, her friend's Mum, Mum's friends gave plant to her too. Mum liked plants so she was very happy. It looks like Jungle. The children went Biff's room and they took magic key.
They went to Jungle. There were very green!!! There was a monkey. It looks very cute. They spoke to monkey but the monkey was angry so monkey took them branches. They went to another place, but there were snake!!! They was very astonish!!!! They went another place, but there were a lot of crocodile!!! They run away!!!! Sudden, they caught someone's trap. When they asked help, two person came to them. They helped children. They camped in Jungle because they looked for lost city. Children went to with them. They crossed very dangerous rope bridge. It's very scary. They could found a old boat, they ride it in river. The river had a lot of crocodiles. They went to a waterfall and they into there. In the waterfall, they found stair and they went to up. There were many bats. The stair up finished, they could found lost city!!!! Biff got plants and she decided she gave it her Mum. They challenged into a big building. In the big building's floor was all gold!!! It's very beautiful. Kipper sat down gold chair.
Suddenly, the magic key began glow, so children must get back home. They said goodbye two person and they get back home. Biff could found a plant where lost city. She will put it her Mum's plant.

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Sotbank Dog;)

I met looks like Softbank dog tomrrow morning yesterday. When I waited my boyfriend, he came front of me. He was very cute!!!! His color was white, so looks like Softbank Dog. It's funny!!
I like Softbank's commercial message. It is very funny because the dog is father and he van speak in CM. This Dog is very famous in Japan. I want to buy Softbank!! Now, some people have two cell phone. Softbank is very popular in Japan, I think so.
This Dog named Kai. People call his Kaikun. He lived in Hokkaido. Hokkaido is very cold place. He is white so he match Hokkaido:)☆ I want to meet him and touch his head. I think his fur is very soft. If I go to Hokkaido, I want to find Kaikun and touch him.

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BR 2-03:The Dragon and the Phoenix

This story is thousand of years ago in China. There are two mountain, Dragon mountain and Phoenix mountain. Dragon lived near magic river. Phoenix lived in dark forest near the river. dragon and Phoenix was always enjoy in river and near sky. One day, they found very beautiful crystal on island. It's very very beautiful!!!! Dragon washed crystal in magic liver and Phoenix washed crystal with his feather. They watched became beautiful crystal. The crystal was very brighten. Then, Queen of Heaven found the brighten and she want to get the crystal. She rod the crystal when Dragon and Phoenix slept well. In the morning, they notice the crystal was disappear!!!! They looked for the crystal anyway but it was nothing. At night, they found brighten crystal at sky. They regain crystal from Queen of Heaven. Then, the crystal roll down!! The crystal drop in the river. Dragon and Phoenix was must leave beside the crystal. They always beside the crystal and Today too

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Short essay: Spa

Kumamoto has a lot of spa where the plase anyway. Japanese people like spa and I like spa too:) Kumamoto has a lot of spa. The number about 500~1000. There are various spa place. a lot of spa but we don't know small spa place.

The spa is a lot of kinds. For example, wine spa, open-air bath, electricity spa and so on. Spa has many effect for our body. When we take spa, our body is very smooth and beautiful. Each spa have many effect and good point.

My best spa in Kumamoto is Kurokawa spa, Aso farm land spa. Batten no yu. Kurokawa spa is very famous spa in Kumamoto. Don't know kurokawa spa who lined in Kumamoto. The Kurokawa spa has Japanese-style hotel. The place is very popular. There are a lot of visitor and many reservation. Aso farm land spa has 10 open-air spa. When I wet to there, I take all open-air bath at there. The spas are very large and good atmosphere. I like there:) Batten no yu is near my house. when I want to go spa, I always go there. The spa is usually spa but I like there.

Spa is very feel good and make us relax. Why people like spa?? I think spa is makes us feel good:) I want to go more many spas and I enjoy take bath. Let's go to spa!!!!

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Leisure spots in New Zealand vs. Leisure spots in Kumamoto

Many people go to famous places or favorite places of attraction in Kumamoto. There are many ]famous spas, beautiful night view places, Kumamoto castle, Kumamoto zoo and so on. Such attractions are because we can know each place’s characteristics what the famous attractions have are. What are attraction’s characteristics and good points ? Why are the places famous and popular?
To answer these questions, I will ask my friends and people, give a question near is some people in Kumamoto and Auckland where to do people go in Auckland? What are many good points? Do people goes to the same places in Kumamoto? Have the attractions special characteristics depending on the place?

Kumamoto’s main attractions are Kumamoto castle, Aso, Kurokawa spa, Mitsui green land, Kumamoto zoo and so on. The Kumamoto castle was built about 400 years ago, and is a very historical castle. One special characteristic is “Ishigaki”. It is curved so that the enemy can’t come in the castle, named “Samurai returned”. There are also many other very famous places and popular places in Kumamoto, but people come to Kumamoto, they always come to see Kumamoto castle. It is popular tourists. There are a lot of traditional Japanese style buildings in among castle. In spring, there are a lot of cherry blossoms, so people come to see it at there.
Aso is also a popular place in Kumamoto. There is a lot of farms and Aso mountains. We can see a lot of cattle and houses. Aso mountain is an active volcano. It’s always smoky, and mountain’s caldera is biggest in the world. There are a lot of people who come for hiking and sightseeing. When the volcanic is less active, we can visit the crater but when the volcanic activity is active and poisonous gas occurs the is closed.

Japanese people like spas, so Kurokawa spa is popular in Kumamoto. Kurokawa spa has many very good open-air bathes and a country atmosphere. The spa has many good ingredients for our body. If we take a spa bath there, we get very good skin. We can have a good time there.
Mitsui green land is an amusement park in Kumamoto. There are a lot of rides and play equipment. There are 89 rides altogether. There is ferris wheel biggest all over the world. The height is 105 m. Sometimes animated character shows come there with children. The Kumamoto zoo is standard place, always crowded with families and couples. As we see, another Kumamoto’s attractions are very natural, historical and family oriented.

Auckland’s attractions include Skytower, Mission Bay, Aquarium, Zoo and so on. The Sky tower is the symbol of Auckland. The height is 325 m. We can do to sky jump (bungee jump) from 192m. We fall at about 85 km an hour. The cost is $40 but we can make a good memory in Auckland. We can see very beautiful view. There are guides and tours. We can see historical settled place of Maori at Auckland museum. There is a gift shop on the Ground floor. We can buy souvenirs for ours family and friends. There are restaurants and an observatory in this tower’s high places.
The Kelly Tarllton’s is aquarium in Auckland. There are a lot of kinds of rare fish. We can enjoy seeing rare fish and we can learn about them. The theme park aquarium is set up as the South Pole exploration world. The South Pole exploration world includes a reconstructed hut of the Scotfish expedition, exploration experience on a snowmobile, inspection of penguins in sub-zero weather and so on. We can seeing a penguin where outside to thought a window. The aquarium is underground so we can see fishes at the water tunnel. The length is about 120m. If it escapes from an underground tunnel, souvenir Shop is in before an exit. We can buy souvenirs
Auckland Zoo has New Zealand's largest greatest zoo in domestic. There are number of few animals who KIWI, TUATARA of the reptiles called survival of a dinosaur, elephant, lion and so on. The large area of each animal was taken compared with the zoo in Japan. The animals not looks like cramp. There is Japanese garden inside the garden.
New Zealand has a lot of beaches so people often go to the beach. According to my survey, a lot of Auckland’s people go to Mission Bay. Mission Bay is a suburb of Auckland city, in the North Island. Mission Bay takes its name from Malanesion Mission, which was based in the bay. Present-day Mission Bay is built upon three parcels of land comprising part of the kahimarama block that where bought from still stand in the reserve, on area of parkland adjacent to the beach. When they go to the Mission Bay, they enjoy running or walking. Kumamoto has beaches too, but most people often don’t go there, because they are very far from the center of the city.

Compared to Kumamoto, Auckland’s attractions are very active and exciting so people can spend enjoy each weekend. Auckland’s attraction are also closed then most of Kumamoto’s attractions so, people can go there easily . The zoo is also different compared with Kumamoto’s zoo. Auckland’s zoo has a lot of rare animals and is very large. Auckland has many spas but Auckland’s people don’t go to a spa as often as Japanese people. Auckland has a lot of farms like Aso, but people don’t go to there to sightseeing. It’s different in Japan. Because, Auckland’s farm don’t have nice places to enjoy attractions. Kumamoto’s farm has nice places to enjoy attractions. The Auckland’s Skytower is so nice. Kumamoto has no tower, Kumamoto’s attractions good points an that we can know history and feel relaxed. Auckland’s attractions good points are that we can play excitingly and enjoy.
According to this research attraction, we see that attractions are different according to each place’s characteristic. With further research of other country’s attractions, we can continue to develop this concept.

I love N.Z!!!!

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little known aspect of Kumamoto: Brainstorming

Foods
Basasi
Karashirenkon
Noppeiziru
Ikinaridanngo
Tipien
Cool miso soup
Place
Aso
Kurokawa spa
Kikuchikeikoku
Shirakawasuigenn

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Funny!!!!!

I like this!!!! Them stage name is Hannya.

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BR 2-02: Soup with obby

There are Obbygobulm and a girl. Her name is Sam. She know Obby because she went to go obby's world used magic button and she met him. One boy named Jojo. He didn't know who is obby??? He wanted to know, so She want to take Jojo and them friends to there. She pushed magic button.

The doors slid back and everyone stepped out into a leafy glade. There are birds, sun, beautiful river and green. There is very shine each other. They could see a little green door set onto a rock. Suddenly Obby came our his house because he heard voice of somone. He wearing glasses so Sam understood Obby at once. They went to Obby's house. The house is very cute because there are many little chairs and table. They felt this house is comfortable and very lovely!!! Jojo and friends thought Obby was grympy??? They are afraid of Obby's face at first.

He made soup in his house just then so his glasses steamed up. He take mix in pan with big spoon. Obby begin took the soup divide each dish. He want to ate them soup made by Obby. They couldn't eat because the soup looks like tasteless. Jojo challenged eat the soup... The soup is safe!!!! The soup tasted chocolate! He and his friends are surprised. The soup was yummy!! Why the soup was taste good??? The soup's secret was Magic Toadstools. It is mushroom.

Suddenly, Obby scuttled to door and shut!! His face to be grim. Gong came his house!! Gong was very big bully!! Obby hastily took Sam and her friends ran for the magic buttm because it was very denger!! Obby reached in his paw and hit the buttun. The door was closed and his face was funny.

Sam thought Obby had in trouble and very worry. She had to go back but she can't...
Obby isn't grim. He is very kind and funny. I want to know Obby is all right??? I'm worry too!!!!

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Essey:community life

My life is very important communication. I often communication with my friend:) My friend take me happy feel and sad feel. I often be careful about community. Community is veri difficult but we can get good communication everyday.

I went to NZ in August this year. I couldn't speak English well, but I challenged talk and gesture. It is very difficult!! When I had a cold, I do my best talk to my host family. Community is very difficult for me. I always be careful communication;)

CFomunication is not only people but also animals. I have a cat and a pet. I think comunication with our pet is importani too. Animais can't speak, so we must feel what think animal and what want to do animal. I always decide feel take sad for my pet.

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BR 2-01:Man Eating Snails

There are Billy and Ravi. They are friends. Ravi couldn't walk so he ride always wheelchair. One day, Billy had a brilliant idea. He went to Gohill's shop where there were Ravi. He want to tell him his brilliant idea. The Billy's brilliant idea was going to open a Safari Park in his house garden!! He wanted to be rich. He thought when we opened the Safari Park, we can to be rich.

Safari Park has a lot of animals, so they want to got lions and monkeys and tiger and so on. But they had many problems. How to get animals??? They went to go park. There is a fat cat!! They caught the cat and put into box. They thought this cat was looks tiger and this cat was dangerous!!! Billy had idea!! Ravi's pet named Stinker was dangerous animal!! He thought Stinker was dangerous. Next, they found a fat cat. They caught the cat. In a shout time, they could found Stinker, Cat, Fat cat, a large snail, spider and a dead mouse.

Billy begun to set labels for their animals and Ravi made a sigh to the middle gate. They preparation them Safari Park and opened their. Some people come in Safari Park but there are many strange things. The snail's explanation is Man-Eating snail. The snail looks not big and can't eat man. Billy told them it's just a baby!! This snail will grow big. The fat cat explanation is panda from china but it's looks like normal fat cat!! Billy told them this is small panda! They had many questions. Suddenly, the fat cat wanted to catch dead mouse so she struggle in the garden. All of animal struggle in the garden and the Safari Park is end. He couldn't gave money because the Safari Park was very but!!

This main character is very funny. They are children so they have very cute idea. This book's picture is cute and interesting to read:)

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Free-write Cimmunity life

When I was a high school student, I devoted myself to club activities. My club is brass band. I played flute:) Our brass band was very very friend. Our club member is almost girl but few boys
. We were friend not relationship between man and woman. We likes music!! We practice every day and all day:) We sometimes had quarrel but reconciliation at once☆ We can cooperation and admit each other. We sometimes practice together. I like practice together different instrument and know other instrument's rhythm.
Brass band cooperation is very important. If someone mistake, all music hear funy. Each part is very improtant and imortant responsibility.
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Brainstorm-community life-

works mates
Part-time job
nabe restaurant
chiese food restaurant

friends
Hometown
University
High school
(brass band)
Junior high school
Club
(university)

familys
Pets
Relatives

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Cake!!

I went to cake shop whin my friend yesterday:)☆ I ate millefeuille and tiramisu!! Kaori ate mont blanc and custard pudding and Mikiko ate tiramisu and a cream puff.
It's very delicious:) I like cake but I can't eat many cake. If I eat man cake, I have ill.
I don't have many money so Kaori treat me cake!! She have much money☆ We had very good time. When we ate cake finished, We were talking:)
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Very Cute Cat!! :)

I like this cat because very cute!!!!
The cat's foot is open!! I like this cat☆

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MR:Mrs.doubtfire

This story is one family's story. One day father unemployment his job but his wife is very busy. Father and them children has party in them house. For a while, his wife come back home. She has surprise because the there are very very messy and a lot of animals. She has very angry to his and she approrach divorce. They to be other. Them children had very sad. Father want to meet his childern so he to be homemaker. His wiferecruitment home maker, so he pretend himemaker. First, His children don't like her because she can't good cook and clean. But she can be cooking and cleaning. His oldest daughter has doubt to her. One day he come out she is them father!! His wife isn't know she is her husband. some of the day, she understand he is her husband. They are fiting and them to be make up!!!! This family to be happy:) ☆
I like this story. This movie make me happy and funny.

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Honesty

I don't like lie, but I often say lie because I often must say lie. I don't like say lie. I think my friend doesn't say lie, but may they sometimes say lie. The lie is not good things, but people say sometimes lie. I always say honesty for my boyfriend, because I can't say lie. Of couse, I can't say lie for my family. The lie is makes people happy and sad. The lie is very difficult. If I say lie, the lie makes people happy. I always don't say lie.

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Family

This movie's family is separately, but father is doesn't like separately. So, he to be housekeeping.
I think family is improtant people for us. If I feel sad, my family makes me happy. I think we must treasure our family. This movie tell us about family and human relations.

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Thems to consider: Mes. Doutfire

Family children
Friendship
Love
∫onds/bonding
Employment
Divorce
Marriage
(dis-)Honesty
Housekeeping
Actors/Acting
Humour
Lifestyles
Philosophy of life

Essay: My Favorite Place

Downtown is my favorite place because there are a lot of kinds shop. When I have many money, I always go to downtown and go shopping. I like shopping. The downtown is three streets. It name is Simorooti, Sinsigai, Kamitoori. There are very cute shops. I can buy cute clothes and eat very delicious food. I always go downtown with my friends and my boyfriend. I like walk downtown but I must wearing cute clothes, because a lot of people wearing very cute clothes. I like look cute clothes and very cute shop. When I don’t have money, I always just looking shops.

I like quiet place at there. There are know body knows place. There are few people. I like spent lazily at there. Downtown has a lot of hair salon. I always go downtown to cut my hair. There are many good technique hairdressers. I like talks with them when I take cut my hair. When I want to something to drink, I always go to café. The café is very fashionable, Starback, Sunmalk, and so on. People like café so always many cafés is popular. There are Movie theaters but the movie theaters are not popular at downtown. There were four movie theaters in the old days but it became one movie theater now. I always go to bar, because my club has often eats and drink at there. Downtown has many bar so my university’s clubs always eats and drink in downtown.

Downtown is date spot. There are always many couples. I often go downtown with my boyfriend. I often go PARCO and amusement arcade. There is very noisy but many games. I like play game with my boyfriend. I enjoyed it. A lot of couples go Karaoke, bar and so on. They enjoy spend each times.

Downtown is danger at night, because there are drunken persons, fraud and so on. Don’t walk only one. I am always careful at night. Downtown has very bright light at noon, but it is dark at night and the sound is quiet. It’s difficult noon and night. Downtown is very fun but danger at night. In world is various people so we always attentive in downtown.

My favorite place is downtown. There are a lot of smiles and make fun. Downtown has extreme clothes and information. The place is always makes me happy and cute. Downtown have a lot of kind shops, so people don’t tired of downtown. In the street, many trees at side in downtown and garbage. The nature is so few. I think downtown must increase nature and economy. It make world good. I want to go downtown everyday and go shopping. There are always good smile and laughter.

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Favorite Places: Brainstorm 01

Atmosphere
Quiet
A lot of people
Noisy
Couples
A lot of smile

Places to do things
Movie theaters
Shops
Hair salon
Karaoke
Cafés
Restaurants
Bar
Shopping
Clothes
Nature
Trees
Flowers


Street
Situation
Lights
Sounds

Favorite place

Downtown is my favorite place,because there are a lot of kinds shop. When I have many money, I always go to downtown and so shopping:) I like shopping. The downtown has very cute clothes shop and many food shops☆ I can buy cute clothes and eat very delicious food. I always go downtown with my friends and my boyfriend. I like walk downtown but I must wearing cute clothes, because a lot of people wearing very cute clothes. I can't chose my clothes It's very difficult to me(;-;) I like look cute clothes and very cute shop. When I don't have money, I always just looking shops. Downtown is very popular place in Kumamoto.

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Fall activity

In fall, many tree has colored leaves. It's very beautiful:)
I like walk with my dog and watching colored leaves. When I watch it, I feel relax and happy. My dog feel happy too:) Walk is very good for my body. I have lack exercise, so I walk with my dog. I don't like walk alone, so I always walk with my dog or my friend. I like listening to music too. I like pop music. If I have free time, I walk with my dog while listening to music. When I listening to music, the walk is very interesting!!
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Rip Slime

I like this group. This song is make me feel relax. Let's listen this song!!

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Typing Essay: website

I like chocolate and sweets so I want to go web site about that!! When I watched these homw page, I had hungry and I want to eat chocolate!! These page is very cute and have good point!! and bad point. I introduced these page!!

This web site is named Mary of chocolate shop.Quite music is piped in through speakers. We can see a lot of chocolate. Various kinds of chocolate is introduction in this web site. It is very easy to know various kinds chocolate. We can feel this shop's atmosphere and wonderfull of goods on this web site. We don't know Mary so we can know who is Mary on this web site. This web site's color is blue so we can easy to see and shining the chocolate. A lot of devise in this web site. Mary of shop is very historical chocolate shop. The chocolate is very good and refined!!☆ This web site has many pictuer of chocolate and this shop. We can got many information of this shop. The pictuer is cute!! When I watch this web site at first, this is so cute!! and the chocolate is looks appetizing☆:) I look this wedsite as for as this shop is very popular!! This web site's devite is we can see freely to chocolate and the explanation. I like this web site!! I think if this web site moer colorful, this web site more cute!! At first, I don't understant where is menu and chocolate pictuer. I think more easy understant to see. And this web site more good☆!! The chocolate pictuer can see easy and freely is good point!!:)
Let's go to Mary home page!!

http://www.mary.be/en




This web site is cute too and colorful!! This shop is in N.Z so a lot of kinds of chocolate use KIWI!! It taste is good☆:) I have ever eaten KIWI chocolate:) This web site has a lot of sweets pictuer each other. We canh see what kinds of sweets in this shop. We can contacts in this shop. This web site is looks american!! This web site's bad points is don't chocolate's explanation. I want to what taste and what in to the chocolate!! So, it is lack!! And I don't understant what sell now. Good point is pictuer about a lot of kinds of sweets. It looks easy and cute!!
Let's go to Remarkable weets shop home page!!

http://www.remarkablesweetshop.co.nz

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