Writing IV Exam

1. I expected to English teacher’s look my grammar and attention it. I don’t know my grammar is good. We also write our blog but we don’t know our grammar is good. So, I want to know my bad grammar and our grammar better. And I wish how many write my blog a week and how many I should write book review. I also write blog when I have a lot of time but when I don’t have time, I can’t write blog. I don’t liked write blog because it spend a lot of time. If I should write report, I can’t write blog. It is very difficult problem.


2. I learned to writing is fun and how to use computer. Writing is difficult for me but I sometimes write blog, I like to write blog. I can write blog many things. Blog is free so very easy to write. I didn’t use to computer but this writing class is use computer so I learned how to use computer. It is fun for me. I don’t know my grammar is better, but I think writing ability is better than before.

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My pets!!

I have a dog and a cat!! They are very cute!! We love them. My dog name Tiara☆ and cat name Mickey☆ Tiara is 7 years old and Mickey is 13 years old. Tiara like natto and dog's snack. When we eat dinner, she always come here and look us. She is very expert wish. She is very cute! Mickey like very warm place and fish. She always come here on the table when we eat dinner. When I sleep, she everyday come and in my bed in Winter. They lived in our house. They don't go out but Tiara go out, when she go walk with us.
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BR 2-12:Viking Adventure

There were children. They had Mr Johson's class. The class was about Viking. I like to ride on one very much because it is so exciting to me. I would often ride on it when I was younger than now. I would often go to theme parks with my family, friends of mine and my boyfriend. The children made longship and Viking mskr-believe. When they went back home, they want to go Viking world. They had bliriant idea!! They thought the magic key began grow in the dark, so they wearing blanket. Then, the magic key began glow and they went to Viking world. They rided on the longship and one viking found they who wearing blanket.Suddenly,the big wind and the ship begun shake hard. The shup stand the wind and they could arrive their villege. The villege people couldn never seen the children. One of the children gave some sweets for viking children. The viking gave dinner for children. It was viking foods. Sudden, another lingship came here and one of the villagers found it!! He call help!! They ran to the villege and going to attack!! One of the children had flashlight and she turn the another viking. They surprise the flashlight and went away. The night they had a party and one viking gave the children shield. The magic key was grown. It was time!! Children showed shield for Mr jonson. he had surprised!!
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BR 2-11:Superdog

One family watched wise dog on the TV. They have dog too. His name was Floppy. They want to be same the dog him!! Next day, the children made a dog run and he run the couse. He had very tired. Children went to swimming with Wilma's mum. Floopy went to children's room and the magic key was began grow!! Floppy went to a big city. A lot of people and very noisy. The people of city was very busy!! Suddenly, a baby carriage went to bown slope!! The speed was very fast. Baby was very dangerous!!! Floppy ran fast and catch the baby carriage with his teeth. The baby was safe!! People sais superdog!! Sudden!! the lady's bag was theft. Floppy was ran and cought quick for him. The thief arrested by police. People said he is hiro!! Foppy went to port a big ship came in. A boy was drop in sea!!! Floppy was quick fall in sea and helped a boy. Floppy to be very famous dog!! One dog was bully buy big dog, but floppy come. The big dog went away!! Floppy a lot of helped people!! Suddenly the magic key was began grew. The children found Floppy in ther room and they had angry!! Floppy was ran away and he hide giant pipe.

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BR 2-10: Land of the Dinosaurs

Three children went to land of dinosaurs use magic house. It took them. They found very big dragonfly and very big footprint. They took picture with big footprint. One of the children found many big eggs. One egg began broke and small dinosaur burned. It was not cute:( Suddenly, flying dinosaur came for them. They went away but small dinosaur picked up the dinosaur. One of the children ran out with stick. The flying dinosaur went away. The thing was very dangerous!!!! One of children climed hill. He looked for dinosaur. He climed a dinosaur!!!! He was jumped down the dinosaur. Suddenly, another dinosaur came to here!! It was very dangerous dinosaur. One of children took picture the dinosaur. They hurry ran away!! Then, the magic key began grew. They came back the house. But, the photo wasn't put a film;(

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Future

I want to belong somewhere hotel or shop of work. I have part time job. It is restaurant. I like service for people and I like people. I sometimes miss something to do. I felt very sad, but their are not but things!! It connects for my future. My senior is my respect person. She always smiles her face, when she talked with customer and service for customer. She had sometimes happen sad things or bad things, but she always smile!! So I respect her!! Her smile is very nature and cute:) I want to be looks like her.
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BR 2-09:Camping Adventure

One day the Mum and Dad and their children went to camping. Mum and Dad pitch a new tent with their sun. Their doughter went to got a lot of water. They liked the place. Mr Joes was famer. Mum want to the farm's milk and went to the farmhouse. Mrs Jones was expectant mother. She will bear soon. Dad made dinner. They ate it. At night, children couldn't sleep and their parent too. The day was very powerful wind, so the tent was down and they went to farmhouse. Sudden, Mrs Jones baby was coming. She went to hospital by car, but the tree was fall. She couldn't go hospital. Her husband call hospital. Helicopter was coming. They made landing place in Mr jones farm. The helicopter was coming but it too late!! Mrs Jones borned a very cute boy. He is very cute and sweetie.

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