BR 1-02: The Great race

The story is one day, Grandmother wanted a new car because her grandchild sad likied Gran's old car. She bought fast car. The magic key glowed. The magic took them to a race. They took part in the race. At that time, a man looked Gran. He is bad man. A man changed the signpost but they didn't see the sighpost. Next the bad man put oil the road. The car skipped on the oil. I feel thrill. The bad man was behind. Gran was in front. I felt yeah!!! Gron won the race. Gran took the fast car back. She bough a little car.
I feel the Gran is full of enegy!! I think her drive is very good!! I want take hers driving a car. I feel funny because the bad man is a lot of fumble. This story is very nice!! 146words